Making Joseph Locke Proud

Jan 27

Oliwer has worked incredibly hard over the last week to produc an amazing piece of persuasive writing and has really thought hard about the persuasiv techniques he could use. Patricia has been working hard at school and at home on improving her writing and Aidan was super-focuses when completing his big write.

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Oct 04

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Sep 21

Well done to these boys who wrote about volcanoes after making their own notes.

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Oct 21

Well to Lee and Deaken for their huge improvement in writing. Great use of figurative language today to set a very spooky scene!    

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Sep 26

Well done to Light for her wonderful writing. Keep it up!

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Jun 15

Well done Ebony and William! Wonderful information texts all about Ancient Greek theatres!   

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Jun 08

I’m proud of Shaun’s super information text all about sharks. Great use of brackets to add extra information and some really interesting facts too. Well done Shaun. Keep it up!   

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Mar 24

When I read some Year 2 writing today, I was hanging on the edge of my seat, wondering what was going to happen… Fantastic building of tension: well done! 🙂   

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Feb 04

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Jan 26

James has worked super-hard this week to improve his extended writing. Well done – a wonderful non-chronological report telling me all about Angry Birds! I now know all about their diet… Do YOU know what they eat?

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